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    Hallowen in another way from Poland

     

    Hallowen is all about scaring ghouls demons and trick or treats right guys ?

    Than I think my novel is perfect for that kinda thing !

     

    So Im gonna present you two chapters of my novel Galaxia The Stories of Illusion Im hoping will be read life on Larry King's Halloween show thought as life taught me sometimes hoping is just hoping !

     

    but why don't you decide !

    Ok now most of you know and remember horrors in which people mysteriously dissapear what happens to them ?

    Why do they dissapear ?

    Is it an evil curse now all is well that ends  well which means typically that it stays in fiction but what to do when suddenly these things become real ??

     

    chapter 13

     



    "The Mysterious Dissapearence"

    "and than he entered the darkness of
    the palace he was drown in it
    hahahaha You will never return to
    the world of the living this is the
    this is the power of the course" I read it

    It was my and Lydhia watch but this time
    we all in  pilots cabine it was the same day we
    took part in that race. Now we all moved to the
    kitchen Demonica was doing Sandwitches for us
    "Good Story Dude" Said Skatie
    "No ...no it was terrible" Said Eleila frightened of the course
    "Little Eleila was afraid of the course" Said Chriss
    " No I wasn't" Said Eleila
    "Enought" Said Dr Olchiward
    Demonica opened the fridge she was looking for something
    Then she turned to Ikernel
    "Go for the tomatoes to the magazine on the double" Said Demonica
    "Why me ?"said Ikernel
    "GO !!!" Said Demonica

    Ikernel reacted almost instanly he went and never
    returned.
    We weren't aware what was going on we waited for 30 minutes
    finally Demonica lost her patience
    "If ILL see him he will wish to disappear for 30 years" Said Demonica

    she went to our magazine she opened the door locked the door
    and you could here
    "Well well well what do you thin you're doing in here...." You could hear
    we heared a quiet talk a mumble I think
    "I wounder what did he give her" Said Dr Olchiward
    "Why do you think he needed to give her something" I said it
    "She's quiet "said Dr Olchiward

    We forgotten the the tomatoes but they weren't returning
    two hours have passed
    "Hey dude me thinks its a curse" Said Skatie
    "Be quiet!" Said Eleila
    "they're not returning and that silence" I said it
    "Now now now Ill go and get them" Said Dr Olchiward
    "No dad NO" Said Eleila
    "Eleila please don't be supersticious Ill be back" Said Dr Olchiward
    He left and went to the magazine like the ones before him
    "No that's impossible........." We could hear from the Magazine

    Five hours have passed Eleila felled really guilty
    "Why didn't I stop him" Said Eleila
    "Eleila calm down its just fiction" I said it
    "My father,Ikernel Demonica are they fiction too ?" Said Eleila
    "Eleila is right something is not right here" said Lydhia
    "Yea right Galaxia show us the image from the magazine" I said it
    "Im loading video....Camera not connected"Said Galaxia
    "You see" Said Lydhia
    "eee now come on I bring them back" Said Skatie
    she went over there
    "All right dudes.....whts that....." Said Skatie and
    she was silenced

    We waited for Skatie an entire day we tried not think about
    anything related to that matter.
    "You seee !!!" Said Eleila
    "Calm down Im going my self" Said Chriss
    "No chriss wait" I said it
    "So you belive in this" Said Lyshia
    "huh....take a lamp its dark there you might trip" I said to Chriss and
    gived him a flash light We could only hear
    "Wow cool.........."Said Chriss and was silenced

    we awaited for them the entire two days just to be safe
    "Well they should come out a long time ago" Said Lydhia
    "Yea !!! huh if you don't belive me check it yourselfs
    they're playing a prank on us" I said it ultra frightened
    "You go unless you're afraid" Said Eleila
    "hey can you roll a dice ?" I said it

    I remembered that I had a dice that could be used for cheating however
    it is rolled it will always show 6
    "What why ?" Said Lydhia
    "To see who is destined to go if three times in row the number rolled
    will be three You go if not I go its simple you're the ones rolling" Said Lydhia
    "You're an idiot fine than" Said Lydhia
    she rolled of course it was number six three times
    "Thats just impossible" Said Lydhia
    "Where going Eleila" Said Lydhia
    "Wait ....take this it will keep you safe" I said and gived them my lasersword
    "Thats your Laser sword" Said Lydhia
    "Take it you'll never know" I said
    I gived them also my Walkie Talkie
    "say if you'll be in danger" I said it
    They went in
    "thats thats..." said Eleila and was silenced
    "Eleila....." Said Lydhia and she was silenced

    I waited for them entire two weeks believing it was a prank

    "So Im alone " I said to myself
    "theres no body left" I said it to myself
    "IS THIS THE WAY IT SHOULD FINISH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!"I said it
    "Well Im going but first Im gonna write my own will...Yes just that....
    Galaxia write it down .....I Stanislaw Died an honorable Deadth" I said it
    "It was saved" Said Galaxia
    " Im going" I said it
    And I entered the dark corridor of the shuttle when I was nearing
    to the magazine I saw a dark hole in the center of it where everyone was
    trapped for eternity suffocating to their deadths then I saw a monster
    that eated them I opened the door entered I heard a voices I tripped over
    a box and suddenly I was attacked by monsters then I saw terrible things I was
    fighting with horrible creatures and than I woke up to see Lydhia
    "Oh my we entirely forgot about him" Said Lydhia
    and she gived me lasersword to me
    "Whats going on?" I said it
    "Well its a long story when I wented for the tomatoes I found this" Said Ikernel
    and showed me a Polish coin from 1987
    "I was trying to find out from where are this coins" Said Ikernel
    "Thats all" I said it
    "Well there are other things as well" Said Ikernel
    After hearing this I returned to the Pilots cabine I didn't want to disturb
    them Lydhia followed me
    "oh Stasek it seems you were right lets watch some tv" said Lydhia
    "You don't want to be with them ?" I said
    " I have something more interesting here" Said Lydhia

    we watched the television I will never read books about courses I decided to watch
    movies about vampires it was safer after all vampires do not exist .....and Just than I was

    bitted by Lydhia in the neck !! Whats going on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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    Well so what do you think ?

    have you expected that ?

    Ok Vampires the blod suckers known from blood sucking theire rumored to be dead corpses wanting revenge for the fact that their loved ones didn't give them a proper burial,or poor souls that were bitten by a vampire who are not able to return to their humanity so lets take some garlick now and alot of it were going VAMPIRE HUNTING

     

     

    Chapter 31 
    "The Fearless Vampire Hunters" 

    Althought its not a new information for you guys from the entire 9 
    force Jewels currently we managed obtain 3  
    -Ice King (Jewel belonging to Eleila) 
    -Fire Master (Jewel belonging to Chriss) 
    - the calmless of peace Jewel (jewel belonging to Lydhia) 
    However the fourth one was already waiting for its master...................................................... 
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    "Wait cause I didn't quite get that....were suppose to kill a vampire....Count me out 
    of it ..theres no way im gonna do that !!" Said Ikernel 

    After a while our group (WITH ALL ITS MEMBERS) were heading to Dracula's Castle 
    we landed on planet that was called 'Transylvania' (Than again quite good naming night 
    24/h freaky houses,citizens TAX collectors) you're probaly wondering whats a Vampire  
    well they are demons that feed on human blood they constitute the lowest rank of demons that 
    I meet according to my knowledge they appeared on earth somewhere before 1000 years ago  
    but there are sources that say they existed longer, Now the one we were pursuing is called  
    Dracula ...now Dracula was once a Transylvanian prince called the Vlad tempeller he loved  
    bloody baths or more exactly torturing people and bathing in they're blood,once he died althought 
    there are varying sources of how he died he became a vampire one of the most powerful of the night 
    walkers now I think you should also know that there are diffrent kinds of vampires 
    The most known image of Vampire is in fact Dracula he is Night walker a vampire that 
    cannot walk in day however not all vampires are like that there is a race called 
    Shinso Vampire (shinso from Japanese means Daywalker) That can walk in day and act as a human 
    Concerning Dracula the only information I was able to obtain was that Dracula was killed by Dr 
    Abraham Van Helsing (yes Bram Stoker's Dracula) So I was  wondering was our vampire the real thing 

    Anyways the buildings on the planet were similar to the ones made in the eighteen Century 
    we left the town and was walking in the forest once we got the hill I suddenly got a creepy 
    feeling that we were being watched. 

    Meanwhile in the dark castle we were heading to: 

    Lilly.Boris and Vaclaw were suppose to wake up Dracula 
    "How about we vote on this guys" Said scared Lilly 
    "Fine with me " Said Vaclaw  
    they Voted and the result was that Boris was to open the coffin 
    "Ok Boris go" Said Lilly 
    "And what about you ?" Said Boris 
    "we will back you up" Said Vaclaw 
    " thanks for nothing" Said Boris 

    He opened the coffin the man which was appearing to be a dead body (ready for burial) 
    suddenly moved he looked like 25 year old his face was white he got up  
    "Wilkomen ..who are you ?" Said Dracula (thats the name we will call him,we never found out 
    his true identity anyway ) 
    "wwwwwhhhhheeerrree tthththhtthe Head hunters" said Lilly 
    "Oh So Die Dark MEISTER sended me some help ...I will need to thank him on the next 
    upcoming bal" Said Dracula 
    "You know what to do ?" Said scared Boris 
    "oh JA unfortunately in OUR BEAUTIFUL universe there are some worthless left overs that 
    do not understand the merciful nature of our bellowed Dark Master  but this will not last"Said 
    Dracula 

    Meanwhile we were approaching the Dracula's Castle 
    "Stasek from what I know that Vampire is one of most troublesome servants of Dark Master" Said Leon 
    "well beat the crap out of him" Said Chriss 
    "We need to belive in our selfs DUDE" Said Skatie 
    "well we dealed with worser guys" I said it 
    "All we need is a right strategy from what Im sure he will be guarded by lesser demons" Said Dr Olchiward 
    "He's right" Said Lydhia 
    "I agree" Said Eleila 

    In a short while we worked out a simple yet effective battle plan: 
    1) Despite any circumstances we cannot divide 
    2) We inform each other about demonical threats 
    3) those who use force Jewels protect the ones that don't have that power 
    4) The captain is in charge of the battle  
    5) Absolutely no one from the team can die ! 

    On my order we rushed to the castle  
    "Stasek Demonical presence" Said Demonica 
    shortly after she said it the Ghost Guardians appeared  
    "Eleila !! use your ICE KING!!!" I yelled to Eleila 
    Eleila used the Ice king  
    "Stasek behind you!!!" Yelled Leon 
    I quickly turned back and used my Lasersword to cut the ghosts I got two 
    "Now Skatie !!" yelled Demonica 
    Skatie showed what a girl with a skateboard can do 
    "Doc nine o'clock!!!" Yelled Chriss 

    Doctor Olchiward showed to them the meaning of his defence technology, The guardian ghosts 
    were attacking us all at once they used the Kamikaze technic (they simply blowed themself up) 
    I managed to cover Lydhia from one of these attacks which was very powerful, we hardly managed 
    to get out from the hallway but it was worth it we managed to get rid off these pesky 
    obstacles meanwhile Dracula and 'The head hunters' were awaiting us 

    "'The Experience Head Hunters are we" Said Lilly 
    "Vaclaw" Said Vaclaw 
    "Boris" Said Boris 
    "  And I Lilly so bye bye with your life !!!'"said Lilly 

    "so you are these worthless pests" Said Dracula 
    "Be carfeull with your words young man" Said Dr Olchiward 
    "haha Im 52 tousands years old" Said Dracula 
    "Well its time to die" I said it and attacked him 
    "I admire your courage but I will be the victor" Said Dracula 
    "fight !! in means you find effective !!" I said to comrades while I attacked Dracula 
    he escaped from my wraith and I was caught in a duel with Lilly 
    "So now !!" Said Lilly 
    "Not much" I said it  

    Lydhia attacked Lilly and freed me from her she used the Calmless of peace Jewel 
    "You're smart but this situation is to much for you to handle" Said Lydhia under the 
    Jewels power 
    "Stop the crap !!" Said lilly moments before she got hit and felled to the ground 
    I meanwhile attacked Dracula, Dracula changed into his human appearance and gived me a big 
    Hit. Boris and Vaclaw wanted to attack Lydhia but were caught in that attempt by Leon 
    "how about a little game ?" Said Leon 
    "what kinda game" Said Both Vaclaw and Boris 
    "The game of two morrons" Said Leon 
    and gived them a critical blow from a huge energy ball 

    Meanwhile I got up  
    "There's no point in deceiving yourself how can you win ?" Said Dracula 
    "heh well.." I said it  
    I attacked and Chriss Joined me half way  
    " Damn you" Said Dracula  
    and defended him self from Chriss  
    I attacked Dracula he defended himself,Chriss attacked Dracula he defended himself 
    I attacked Dracula he defended himself Chriss attacked Dracula.................... 
    Dracula was cut in half he was killed The Jewel Darkness of night appeared 
    it Hit Ikernel suddenly a huge aura of Darkness appeared Ikernel was fighting with it  
    and suddenly he possessed Lilly (Well the Jewel Darkness of night helps you to control the dark 
    part of our soul since everybody sins well with exeption of Jesus Christ and God , then 
    usually everybody has also a dark spot on his soul the mark of the sin anyways its a temporary 
    possesion) 
    and Ikernel Said to her 
    "You thou shall leave this place"  

    "Stasek this will not end not because of this" Said possessed Lilly 
    and the Head hunters left  

    The dark aura had disappeared Ikernel was wearing a recognizable medallion 
    we left the castle and we saw how the light from the dark sky appeared and suddenly 
    the dark clouds revealed a beautiful blue sky 
    "Well it most the first so bright day since 2030 years on this planet" Said Lydhia 
    "Well they will have a bright future now" I said it 

    We took a walk and explored the planet, of course we used the opportunity to gather supplies 
    for our voyage.......... 
    Anyways we already have four Jewels: 

    -Ice King (Jewel belonging to Eleila) 
    -Fire Master (Jewel belonging to Chriss) 
    - the calmless of peace Jewel (jewel belonging to Lydhia) 
    - the Jewel Darkness of night (Belonging to Ikernel) 

    Only 5 more to go our mission continues meanwhile  
    In another dimension 

    "huuuh I told you that you should use the real thing Dark Master" Said the Secret Entity 
    "Please forgive unfortunately that damn Hellsing organization beated me to him if 
    only I have found out about him sooner 200 years sooner he would become your servant 
    please forgive me !" Said Dark Master 
    "oh well what a pity" Said the Secret entity  

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    TO BE CONTINUED IN THE NEXT CHAPTER OF GALAXIA

     

    I hope you enjoyed yourselfs reading this and Im hoping that I sustained your attention for a while Im a practicing Novelist (wanna be anime and movie director) from Poland

     

    Next time Ill show you how Poland Saint Day looks like (a Holiday that takes place during the Halloween)

     

    Galaxia The Stories of Illusion was written by Stanisław Giers in 2003 and translaited and published in 2009 all rights reserved

     

    If you wan't to read more of Chapters from my Novel you can do it at:

    http://sites.google.com/site/megacivilisation/Home

     

    And please tell me what you think of my site

     

    Happy Halloween

    or should I say ? Trick or Treat ?

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